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Your Sales Proposals: Perky Quote or Peaky Pitch?

This article is for anyone who is facing having to put together a sales proposal, cost estimate, pitch document or quote for a customer.

Whilst an essential part of business life, sales proposals often engender a sense of loathing in those who have to compose them and a sizeable degree of boredom in those that have to read them.  So how do you put across your sales proposition in a way that engages the reader and makes them want to buy from you?

Look through their eyes

It’s common practice for customers to source 3 or more quotes before they select on a supplier, which means that’s 3+ proposals/ estimates they’ve got to wade through.  So let’s imagine them for a moment sitting at their desk with these in front of them.

This is the information they want to get:

  1. How much will this cost?
  2. What do I get for that (in terms of the product or service)?
  3. How will this make my life easier or solve an issue I’ve currently got?
  4. How much was it again?
  5. Can I afford this with my cash flow?

Added together in the customer’s mind these form a sense of the ‘value for money’ your proposition represents.  That’s not to say the cheapest will always win.  If your solution is slightly more but offers the greatest benefits to the customer they may be happy to pay at the higher price.

Going back to that customer facing the 3 proposals:

What do they do first? Well, they’ll probably take a quick glance over the 3 documents and they may even pick each up and flick through them.  Their initial thoughts in doing so are probably going to be along the lines of one of these:

a)     Wow that feels and looks heavy – a lot to read through here. Have I got time?  Not sure.  I’ll just flick to the back where the costs usually are

b)     That’s lighter in weight and look,  I’ll just give it a skim read for now

c)      Oh that’s really concise and to the point.  I’ll read that now

If their day or week is extremely busy, the longer and more cumbersome proposals will probably get relegated and relegated down the ‘to-do’ pile.

Proposals’ bad reputations

So many business people feel they have to create a novel of a proposal to sell their business offering and justify their costs.  It’s one of the reasons why people find the process of putting them together so laborious… and why the recipients often find them so dull and a drain on their time.

What’s worse is when people try and cut corners to save time, pasting chunks of previous proposals into new one.  This is incredibly obvious to the reader and just fills the document with general junk that puts people off rather than impresses them.

The best proposals, cost estimates, pitch documents and quotations are those that are concise and tailored to the customer. What’s more, they lay out the information according to what the customer most wants to know.  So here are some thoughts on how to make your proposals stand out from the crowd and get read in full.

What does it look and feel like when your proposal lands on the desk?  

Ditch convention and what everyone else is doing. Opt for something that feels light to the touch, perhaps printed on both sides of the paper to reduce pages.  Lay out your proposition in a format that will appeal naturally to the eye – for example in a magazine-style one with 3 or 2 columns per page.  Sprinkle in lots of white space and incorporate visuals where possible.  These can be photos, diagrams and key text points highlighted in boxes like ‘quotations’.  Do consider the skim-reader and make your choice of headings and sub-headings grab their interest.

Cater for the mobile addict.

People are busy and the traditional working day and environment has changed under the influence of mobile technology. Ask up front if your customer will be reading this on a mobile device or will they prefer a printed version?  If the answer is mobile then keep everything concise and test it out on yours or a colleague’s mobile to see how the look and feel is coming across before you press ‘send’. Avoid having to make them scroll through masses of text.

Speak the customer’s language and use their words.

Don’t blast customers with your industry vocabulary and terminology.  Use acronyms and specific jargon only if they do.  If they’ve used specific phrases to describe key wants or needs then include these to show you listened and you’re on their wavelength.

Try and get your proposal across in 4 pages or less.

There will be cases where this may not be possible (for example when having to respond to a formal invitation to tender or brief put together by procurement professionals), but where you have more freedom try and create a short concise document.
Here’s a structure you might want to try:

Page 1 – The proposal on a page – an overview which includes:

–        A brief summary of what you understand their requirement to be

–        An brief overview of what your solution comprises

–        The cost (if it’s outside the customer’s budget, burying this at the back of the document isn’t going to help you win their business)

–        The benefits they are likely to get from this

–        Flagging any payment terms/options to help ease cash flow

Against each of these 5 areas you can always point to the part of the proposal document which gives more detail about them.

Page 2 – Your proposed product/solution/ offer in more detail

–        What features it comprises

–        How these will help the client’s situation/requirement

–        If you’re a service company, you might want to flag the people the customer will be dealing with and what specific experience/relevance they have to their situation

Page 3  – The cost in detail

–        If your total fee/price is arrived at from various elements, show how these break down. It’ll demonstrate your figures as being that much more transparent

–        Don’t write your figure with +VAT. Show the net, the VAT and the gross totals so they know the breakdown and don’t have to work this out for themselves

–        Reinforce the benefits to them again in a summary box

–        If you can, do detail any flexible payment options/stage payments etc. to ease cash flow and make it easier for them to buy from you

–        If your Terms and Conditions aren’t too lengthy then include them on this page.  If they are, then you might want to put them in a separate document that accompanies the proposal.  Again, try and keep that concise and not like a lengthy report in appearance

Page 4  – Why your business and not a rivals’?

In this section, rather than giving them a potted history of your business and a list of your services etc. describe yourself through those you’ve helped in this situation.  Use 1 or 2 simple case studies which demonstrate what value you brought to a customer similar to them.  Use diagrams instead of words to describe the process or other imagery. You might want to also sketch out the next steps in the sales process as you see it to guide them how to proceed

 

But what if they’ve given me a detailed brief or if this is a tender driven by procurement?

In this situation it is very important to answer all the questions/points they’ve put to you in their brief.  Lay out your information in the order they’ve sent you (if they have to skip forward and back to find out what they want, they’ll soon get frustrated).

Also, unless the customer has been very strict about the format your document should take, try and consider them reading your proposal.  Can you make it a more enjoyable, quicker experience?  They will appreciate this if you do.

 

Be enthusiastic

Words are emotive and dull technical language will present you as a dull supplier.  Do you want this new business/customer?  Well show it.  You don’t have to be gushy or pushy but you should show your enthusiasm to help this customer.  They will be impressed – especially if this is on top of a proposal that has been tailored to their situation 100%.

 

Summary

If you’ve worked really hard to develop a relationship and win this customer, your proposal should be a mere tick box exercise that you are right for the job.  Ideally, you should have shown in the process up to now how good it would be to work with you/buy from you.  If you’ve asked the right questions the answers will guide you on, not just what needs to go into the proposal, but how it should look and feel to get the customer’s buy-in.

So ditch your boring ‘War and Peace’ proposals and instead impress those you’re selling to with punchy ones that perk up that person’s attention.  They’ll be relieved, they’ll be thankful and it may well motivate them to give you the YES rather than a rival!
Author: Michelle Daniels,  Managing Director – Extended Thinking
www.extendedthinking.com

 

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4 Comments
  1. Sanj says

    Good points. Thanks for the wonderful post.

  2. john says

    Very good insight. Dealing with costumer is very hard but with your presentation, I think I know where to stand. 🙂

  3. satyajit says

    absolutely true great idea keep it up……………

  4. Sarkari naukri says

    Thank you for sharing such informative article for us.